Mythic Inspiration from Genesis 14

By: A.B. Timothy

In Genesis 14, we read of a war that Abram(later Abraham) fights in. He is there to save his nephew Lot. He and several of his servants pursue their enemy and slaughter them on the field of battle. Abram if offered a reward by the King of Sodom because Lot and his family were citizens there, but Abram rejected the offer of riches, not wanting the king of Sodom to be able to say, “I have made Abram wealthy.” He only takes as payment what his soldiers have taken from the enemy and eaten already.

Melchizedek offers bread and wine to Abram.

After this, a character of legend appears called Melchizedek, who is said to be the king of Salem (believed by some to be ancient Jerusalem). This Priest-King appears and offers a sacrifice for Abram and his servants and blesses him with, by showing him another name of God: “El-Elyon”, which is “The Most High God”.

This can be an awesome inspiration for a myth in your world. What if there was an immortal priest whose entire existence is going around and blessing people after they do good with a sacrifice in their honor, and a new name for their God that professes an aspect that the believer always knew, but never had a name for?

What kind of Mythic musings have you found in the Bible? Have you considered the importance of the Bible in Western myth? If not, go check out my article “The Bible: The Missing Key to Western Literacy,” where I discuss this further.

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A Brother’s Death

A Short Story from the “Gifted Cycle” by A.B. Timothy

Richmond, Bodhi, brothers until the very end. One, a stalwart protector of the old crown, a five-century-old monarch, and the traditions she represented; the other, a newly enthroned king of a rebellious union of principalities. There, on the fields of their childhood, nestled between the hills of the Queen’s Spine Mountains of Terra Prima, they stood some hundred feet apart from one another. There along those same hills they had played, they had laughed, they had discussed the mysteries of their reality, and so much more. Now they would have one final discussion, one final battle, though this time, their swords would be very real.

The wind rushed through the grass blades, the sun illumined the field of battle without any needless heat, and the birds had taken up their song, far off, once again. The wind stopped, the sun froze, and the birds went silent as Richmond drew his sword. A heartbeat later, Bodhi had his own blade in his hand. Perfectly matched in their speed, they meet at the heart of the battlefield.

They danced… like the days when the children would dance together to the sound of the birds in the trees, but there was no music to this dance, other than the music of steel meeting steel.

“She loves you… You know.” Richmond’s voice was calm and empathetic to his brother. A frozen stream of white puffed off his tear duct. Richmond watched at least three of the same form around his brother as they danced.

“I know,” Bodhi said, his voice equally calm and empathetic.

“Then why do you not go to her? Be with her? End this war?” Richmond asked.

“My people need me more than I need to be romantically fulfilled by a Terran queen.” Bodhi’s sword sounded on Richmond’s.

“They need you to kill her?” Richmond’s voice rose in offense, the first sign of any emotion in this dance.

“Or her champion… they need me to be the king they crowned, they need a ruler who will put everything he holds dear on the line for his people.”

“Even your own blood?” The double meaning of Richmond’s word caused the first slip in his brother’s guard in the dance that persisted for three minutes. Bodhi caught the slip, and Richmond was only able to scar his cheek with a glancing blow. Taking advantage of this action, which seemed a mistake, would prove fatal for the twenty-year-old swordsman, however, as he felt, between the fourth and fifth ribs, a cold edge of steel enter his chest.

“For my children, I would do anything.” They both sped up to twice as fast as either of them ever had, when Richmond fell to the floor. Blood did not flow; they were in the space between heartbeats, even a beat of their own hearts.

“You have slain me… my brother, but stay with me a while in this place between and hear my heart, hear your brother,” Richmond’s voice was openly sorrowful now, “please.”

“I will stay with you here, for as long as you desire it of me, Richmond.” Bodhi’s voice was stronger than his brother’s, only bolstered, however, by victory.

“Then help me stand and let us dance on the lake of our youth, once again.” Richmond reached up his arm to his brother, who stepped back and hoisted him from the ground. The pair walked south now, away from the heart of death. This was the ultimate fate of their kind: to live the moment of death for all eternity, until they accepted their death.

The pair found their way to the small lake, which had now been converted into a field hospital for the battle, but with the gifts of their time, there was very little blood seeping into the water. Bodhi and Richmond took to stepping across the lake, like they had done in their youth after discovering what they really were. There, they relived memories and danced across the motionless waves of the lake to a music of their own creation, laughing at jokes heard only by themselves and the creator.

Then they rested with their backs propped up by a tree, both picking at the grass beneath them with their eyes afar off. 

“What about that tree?” Richmond asked.

“Oh, the tree where Shona and I kissed… that must have been a lifetime ago,” Bodhi remembered.

“It only feels like a lifetime to us, Bodhi, remember.”

“Ha, yeah, you’re probably right.”

“Whatever happened to you two?” Richmond asked.

“I went off to the army, and she didn’t like that much. She knew about our powers, but she thought she’d never see me again once the government could do its tests. ‘I’d be too important,’ she’d say, ironic. She was right, for all the wrong reasons. I never went back to her, not due to import, but because I was smitten with the empress… then you joined up with me because of your own… gifts. The rest is history.”

“So what happened to us?”

“I’ll chalk the memory loss up to your condition.”

“Humor a dying man, will you?”

“They killed your wife and children… Richy, they killed ‘em dead, ordered you to do it with your own ship.”

“I remember, but duty comes first…”

“Yeah, that’s what you said four years ago.”

“They ordered you to kill your brother… kill ‘em dead, ordered you to do it with your own sword.”

“Oh, come on, Richy, that’s not fair.”

“Isn’t it?” There was a silence that stretched several moments; Richmond broke the silence with a confession. “I love you, Bodhi. You held my heart in your hand our whole childhood, you were my inspiration, my role model, after our father died.”

“I can’t even cry in your death moment,” Bodhi’s voice choked with sobs, “so what are you trying to prove, Richy?”

“I forgive you, Bodhi. I can’t blame you for coming to a conclusion I came to years before. I’m only sorry it took you this long to come to it. How about a pact with your dying brother, hmm? Like a dying wish?”

“What is it, Richy?” He instinctively shoved away the absent tears from his eyes. “In the name of the empress, if it is in my power, I will grant it.”

“End this war… stop the bloodshed, make peace with our queen.” Richmond’s own words were full of sobs now.

“Richy, I can’t—”

“I don’t mean submit to her authority, I only mean make peace.”

“I promise…” He leaned over and hugged his brother on the other side of the tree they had been resting against. “I swear I will see this bloodshed brought to an end, so no brother will ever again have to kill their kin… not while I live.”

“Good… now, I’m ready to go now…” Richmond’s voice was weak and close to giving up, “pull this sword out and… hold me, bubba, please?”

Bodhi could deny his brother nothing now. He stood and walked to his brother’s side of the tree and pulled the sword out, shrinking it once again and putting it on his belt. He fell to his knees and took his brother into his arms and began to sob, kissing his brother’s forehead again and again. “I love you, Richy… I’m so sorry.”

“Know this as I fade now, Bubba… you are forgiven… may you find shelter in her light.” Richmond’s eyes filled first with little white stems of steam, then tears as his heart began to beat again. Bodhi sat there, rocking his brother back and forth, sobbing as he felt the lifeblood pour out of him and stain the grass.

Near a different tree, a line of black was cut in the grass as a split in reality solidified above it. Out from it stepped Her Majesty, Lady Sal of Terra. Her white gloved hand stretched out to Bodhi… “Let us fulfill your brother’s final wish, my lord, let us end this shedding of blood.”

Richmond’s Bubba did not respond; instead, he sat cradling his brother and sobbing into his corpse for an eternity. It took Bodhi much longer to accept his brother’s death.

A Response to Ryan Williamson’s 10/31 AI Discussion

By: A.B. Timothy

On October 31st, 2025, Ryan Williamson, a fellow writer and someone I would consider a peer, both here on WordPress and on X, posted an article on his WordPress entitled, “Far More Authors Than You Think Are Using AI—Guess How Many Won’t Admit It?” There, he discussed the growing trend in the use of Generative AI amongst writers. I originally meant for this “article” to be a comment on his blog, but it grew too big. So here it is instead:

Hey Ryan,

Great Article, man, very articulate and well thought out from the perspective of someone pro the new technology.

I, as I have mentioned on X, have used Grok (an X-based LLM) recently to help me brainstorm ideas to grow and expand my reach on X and grow my audience. This has helped. I’ve gained several followers, I changed my bio, and have been able to put out many copies of my Free Chapter to new followers. And I have begun engagement-hooking, with images and written hooks for RT’s and Replies. I’ve only begun building momentum with these “tricks” all at the suggestion of Grok. I’ve never taken anything from Grok directly, only used him as a backboard to bounce ideas off of and look for tips.

I say all of that so you know that when I say this next part, I understand that it might be seen as throwing stones from a glass house, on my part. I think a lot of readers have AI trust issues. By that, I am referring to your Spock meme in this post. It may be illogical (it is), but humans are illogical creatures. When I hear a writer has gone ahead and outlined their story with AI or allowed the AI to write portions of it for them, I don’t like it. When writers and artists hide their usage of AI, and then it is revealed that they used AI, I feel betrayed.

Paul Atredies Glimpsing the Golden Path

I imagine this feeling of betrayal is something not unique to me. I believe many others undergo it too. This whole conversation of AI versus humans is something that I have given much thought to. For this reason, I have chosen to pay a non-insignificant amount to a human artist who has been commissioned by people I trust (and who I believe is a peer of ours on X), to create the cover for my debut novel. I want as much humanity in my stories as possible. I see a golden path for humanity, but in only mere glimpses. When it graces my sight, I set my heading for that impossible star, and sail in search of a dawn I only pray will come one day.

Does this mean I think creativity is cooked? No. I believe even if we artists fail today, and the industry is wiped out by gleaming-enticing-objectively “beautiful” piles of AI garbage, someone else, one day, will see the golden path again and lead a jihad in the name of humanity. The right to create, to express dominion over, and to rule God’s creation was given to us. Not the rocks we have tricked into thinking for us.

So, Ryan, thank you for making a thought-provoking article that inspired me to write this response. I pray for good health for your family and loved ones, and hope we can continue to pursue our creative endeavors as peers and men of quality.

With Respect and Humanity,
A.B. Timothy, Author

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Happy Halloween, let’s get spooky!

By: A.B. Timothy

Let’s get spooky! Like the title says, I want to prompt you all to write me a spooky short story using your current characters, and enjoy your time celebrating this day if you do. If you finish it today, or just whenever, share it here on WP or on X and and tag me (if on X @ABTimothyAuthor) or tag this post by linking to it!

Stay safe tonight and prepare for November!

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Objectivity in Poetry

By: A.B. Timothy

Yesterday, I discussed the need for an Objective Authority in the fields of debates and arguments. Today, I will discuss, in a similar vein, the need for objectivity in more creative fields.

In college, I was tasked with a poetry assignment in what they called “Free Verse.” My teacher recognized that the idea of a lack of methodology annoyed me, and told me that this would be good for my creative journey. I did it, I did as I was told. Now, two years later, I’ll agree with that teacher; it was good for my creative journey. Because if I had not been forced to participate in such a horrid act of literary chaos, I might never have come to hate it as much as I do.

These days, when I see a poem in free verse, I will usually skip it, or I will groan before reading it anyway. I still have to know what people are saying after all. Even if I don’t want to read it. This is why you will never find a poem of mine without a structure.

Does that mean the structure must be “ABABCDCD?” No! Absolutely not. But if there is no visible structure or comprehensible idea that acts as the flow from one point to the next, I don’t want to read it! At that point, I can go read the First Book of The Fellowship of the Ring for flowery prose.

I’ll use my own work from The Shards of Arthur’s Shield as an example. Below is the Poem, “Arthur’s Call”

“Arthur, king of the West,
Arthur, king, laid to rest.
Arise, lord of the morning,
Arise, the World is calling.
Your sword awaits,
Your Shield Abaits.
Arise, the World is calling,
Arise, lord of the morning.
Arthur, king, laid to rest,
Arthur, King of the West.”

It does rhyme, true, but the Latin form you will find in my book does not. This, however, still works as poetry because it has structure. The work is a mirror like a lake’s calm surface, broken by the two items of power, the sword and the shield. There is more to it than just what is being read.

When we start to lose objective standards in poetic literature, we begin to lose culture, and I would hate to see that happen.

Next time you get asked to write a poem or next time you feel inspired to write a poetic scene, remember to look past the surface and give it a greater meaning.

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The Bible: The Missing Key to Western Literacy

By: A.B. Timothy

red and white concrete church on green grass field

I wrote a little bit about this topic in my post the other week called: “The Advantage of a Church Upbringing.” There, I wrote about my experience in a literature class at my local community college, where my professor explained to me the advantage I would have over my peers, and how right he was. In the West, our literature is so supremely Christian that even the works that profess a lack of faith in God are best understood with a biblical lens, simply because the author was him/herself biblically literate.

Some may argue that it only matters if you read books that were written before our grandparents were alive, but that is not true. Literary magazines today are still full of stories penned by authors who, while claiming atheism, borrow from the Christian worldview to make their arguments or get across their themes. Take the recent story “Cream” for example, which you can read here. This story contains a scene where there is a car that proclaims the Gospel of Jesus Christ over loudspeakers. If you’ve not studied Christian literature, like the Gospels, you will be clueless as to the implications this has in the story and what it could mean for the themes and plot. Yes, it is true, the story is Japanese, and these cars are a common occurrence in many Japanese cities, but the author could have chosen to have his character ignore this detail, but he did not. Instead, he made explicit not of it. This tells us it matters to the story.

An image of The Lord of the Rings book series

There are so many other examples of this in the world of fiction, both speculative and literary. Perhaps the most famous example of this is The Lord of the Rings by J.R.R. Tolkien. This brilliant man did a fantastic job making his works readable and enjoyable for the average reader, but the depth opens up to a canyon of meaning if you are familiar with Biblical themes and subtextual ideas. The idea of the Three Types of Christ, talked about by many scholars and casual Christian fans alike, is something that will go completely unappreciated and unnoticed by people who are ignorant of Christian literature.

The Prodigal Son returns to his father. A picture of the wayward believer coming back to God.

Are you a Christian? It’s not my place to judge the destiny of your soul; all I can do is encourage you. If you aren’t a Christian, that’s okay, for now anyway. In either case, if you aren’t already, go familiarize yourself with the gospels at a bare minimum, and get to understand the themes of sacrificial love, resurrection, devotion, betrayal, brotherhood, and humanity found in them. Read some parables taught by Jesus. Have you ever wondered what someone meant when they said “prodigal”? Well, the meaning of it is at your fingertips, in Luke 15:11-32. That story would be a great place to start, and it will help you begin to see the literary designs of God’s Love.

Interested in seeing Biblical themes in literature discussed further? Go check out Arthurian Aesthetics on X. He has a fantastic blog, and one of his posts talks about the Prophet Jeremiah’s role in bringing relics to Britain.

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End October Progress Report!

Social Media Goals

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How’s it going?

The last few weeks have been rough. Hormonal imbalances, dietary stupidity on my part, and lack of discipline have been eating at me. I will be finishing this month strong and will be announcing huge goals for November (Teaser: Ever heard of NaNoWriMo?)

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The Man at Craginth

A Short Story by: A.B. Timothy

And behold, Elyon spoke, saying, “Thus, when you ask for my mercy, leave none of your disgrace hidden. I am perfect in mercy, but only to those who are true in repentance.” Publo Magister looked from his copy of the holy text to the children who sat in a semicircle around him, listening intently to the story of the repentant killer. Ocis felt his heart swell. Publo continued to read the scripture. He fell to the ground, lying flat upon his stomach, and cried for forgiveness. Lying before Elyon all that he had ever done from childhood. “Please, Lord, I am unworthy to be seen by you, for now you know all my heart.” “Child,” Elyon said, “I have always known your heart, from the beginning. Now you know all your heart and the true, profound wickedness thereof. Arise, go and confess all this that you have to me, to the man of the Temple at Craginth, he has heard from me and will instruct you further.” Ocis arose and did as he was told, pursuing the Lord even until his last days.

One of the children threw up his hand as Publo finished reading. “Yes, James?”

“Bard Magister, is that something everyone must do? Sister Elvera said that we must be ready, and to be ready, we must do what the scripture says. Do we all need to go to Craginth and find the man whom Elyon has spoken to?” James asked.

“Well, James, Craginth was lost many years ago, during the last Burning War,” Publo said.

“Well, maybe I can find it again, so everyone can do what Elyon said to do, again,” James said.

“Perhaps you can,” Publo said.

The man’s back was weighed down with cuts and bruises from a hail of arrows. He and his two brothers had been the only ones to wade through the hail alive. The man still saw, before his eyes, the fading light of his lover’s eyes. Her mouth was frozen agape, eyes wide, and blood trickling from both eyes and mouth. He shook his head to throw away the image. He turned to his shrinking brother on his right and asked, “Brother Burn, how much further?”

“Brother Man,” the shrinking Burron turned to his smaller brother whilst ripping his ax free from the neck of a Burron who had stood in their way, “the star-line says we are only a few hours away.” The Burron aged backward, beginning as a giant and shrinking as they aged.

“Shouldn’t…” The two brothers turned to their lanky third, an elf, and saw the tears running down his face. He pulled his spear from the ineffective shield of a Burron. His tears nearly broke his otherwise stoic speech pattern. “Shouldn’t we rest for the evening? Finish our trek in the morning?”

The man slowly shook his head and looked up at dark clouds that shadowed the valley of the great twin rivers that flowed down toward the faraway ocean. The castle of men that once stood perched next to the rivers along an ocean-side cliff was now half crumbled and smoke, from feed-fires, billowed up, feeding the clouds, along its once great wall. The man looked back to the field of battle and saw again his lover’s eyes now dim. Hadn’t he given enough? Had he not suffered enough for a lifetime, let alone his short twenty years? Apparently, he had not, because the Guide of Elyon knocked on his heart’s door even now; he knew what needed to be done.

“Have you both heard the story of Ocis?” The man asked. He looked from brother to brother, and they both nodded in understanding. “If we truly are approaching the city of darkness… our fathers prepared us well, I think.” The man looked back towards this half-crumbled tower of darkness and felt the weight of the metal plates that hung on his back and chest. Loosening the straps, the plates fell away. The gauntlets soon followed. His hair, matted and muddy with dirt and blood not his own, stuck to his helmet as it was lifted from his ears. He set all these things aside and lowered his head as deeply as he could manage. He still felt the Guide’s knock. He stood and removed his sword, his leg guards, and sabatons, laying them all aside with the rest of his armor. He heard his brothers doing the same. As his, now cloth-covered, legs touched the ground, he felt the knocking stop, and the guide approached him. He felt an overwhelming presence before him just beyond his eyelids. “Open your eyes, child, as you have opened your heart.”

The man opened his eyes and everything was gone, the mountains to either side of the battlefield, the bodies, and the dark castle, were all erased in favor of a void. Not black, no, the presence before the man was too great to call the emptiness black. Speech did not avail our hero, as the presence spoke again, “You come before me, child, seeking what?”

“Mercy, Your Grace, I seek only mercy for me and my brothers as we accomplish your will in this next day of battle.” The man said.

“Henry, my child, have you forgotten your own name?” The presence pulsated and moved with the voice.

“My name, Lord?” Henry said.

“Yes, for when you think of yourself, you have become merely ‘the man.’”

“That is the name the prophets gave, ‘the man.’” Henry said.

“My prophets were not told the name of my chosen, because it was not theirs to give. But they gave you other names, did they not?”

“Yes, L’ordi, Jerki, and Ot’undi,” Henry said.

“But I have called you Henry, since the day you first saw me, have I not?”

“You have.”

“So what is your name?”

“My name is Henry, my lord.”

Thus, when you ask for my mercy, leave none of your disgrace hidden. I am perfect in mercy, but only to those who are true in repentance…” The whole scene, as if his father was reading it to him out of the holy text. He felt his heart swell, he fell to his stomach, he cried, he confessed, and he was commanded. Henry arose and did as he was told, pursuing the Lord even until his last days.

New Things

By: A.B. Timothy

Exposing yourself to new things is hard. It takes willpower to explore things that might make us uncomfortable. That is not a bad thing; however, unless you are recovering from a concussion and using your brain too much can actually hurt you. If that doesn’t sound like something you’re going through, get out there! Explore your city/town, check out a new bookstore, try a new coffee shop, or hike a new trail. Now, sometimes the comfortable is reliable, cheaper, and better, but sometimes it’s not. For example, today I am writing this at a new coffee shop about 20 minutes farther away, and I got the same drink I usually get at my regular store. Two things: 1: the coffee tastes a bit better, and 2: the portion sizes are a little bigger while being almost half the price.

The very same is true for writing. Are you twenty thousand words deep into a Fantasy book and stuck? Try something new, it doesn’t have to be in that world, or maybe it can be. Try writing from a new POV, or write a far-flung story that takes place in the same world but 4,000 years in the future. This could be the refresher you need to reignite the spark of inspiration and finish the story you are stuck on.

Now, does this mean you have to abandon what you started with? No way! Do I think I’ll spend an extra 20 minutes driving out here to this coffee shop for a little bit better coffee and a smaller price tag (which might not be as enticing after the gas prices)? Probably not. But maybe once a week I’ll trek out here and enjoy a little time away from my usual routine. Maybe next time I come out here, I’ll see this nice lady Rachel I met today, again, and we’ll hit it off, who knows what could happen.

What about you? Have you tried new things? Will you try new things? Tell me about a time when you tried a new thing and something beautiful came out of it. Leave that tale in the comments or on one of my social media pages linked at the icons below.

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Running Across the Finish Line

By: A.B. Timothy

When, in life, you approach a finish line of any goal, you must run. To finish the game you must do your best until the very end. If your form slips, your ankle twists, or your voice goes out, you must find a way to press on and finish strong.

This month, for example, I have set myself goals. I want to write 25k words plus an outline. I am only 10k away from completing this goal of mine, but that means I must write more than one thousand words every day between now and the end of the month if I am to achieve this goal. That is more than doable. I had a November several years ago where I wrote three thousand words every day the entire month, so I know I can do one thousand for a few days.

That is where I want to inspire you, dear reader, what goals did you set for yourself this month? Or even this year for that matter. Can you finish them strong? Can you pursue them, running through the finish line? I believe you can, and that you should!

Struggling? That’s okay. Reach out to me via email, or DM me on Facebook or X and we can chat about your current goals and how you can achieve them!

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